Well another chapter another cold shower
WARNINGS include but are limited too
Male to Male contact and talks of turning bad naughty wizards into Thralls
the cycle continues, it seems that there is story followed by porn writers wet dreams followed by more stoy line, with the undercurrent of sex running through out sounds like a fun time for the most part :)
for those wondering where the hell the bushy haired one is and when shed will finally get hers, well if the story allows it will be next chapter if not the one after that, it all depends on how loudly Luna dmeands her fetishs be aired
now the story let the cold water fill tub so you can jump in when needed LOL
Harry chuckled, he had a feeling sooner or later Theo would wonder if he made the right decision, as the teen lay next to Harry spent one more time, he might have forgotten to mention that there was a very real reason almost all of the Sidhe had been worshipped as fertility gods. Rolling over he looked a the blessed out look on Theo’s face and grabbing his leg and giving it a nudge, “Shower time, then breakfast…Draco and Deven have already gone down so if you want anything you better get a move on.”
“Bloody Merlin in a hand basket, I expect to slosh when I stand up,” Theodore Nott groaned as he rolled over and stumbled to the bathroom. Why he wasn’t sore down there he didn’t know, but what a way to go he smiled as the hot water hit his back.
Felling Harry’s soapy hands on his back he felt himself responding again, Merlin what a way to go.
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Walking outside Harry quickly found the area near the beach being used as a dining area and strolled over that way stopping every once in a while to greet some of the newcomers to his Sithen. Finally making the table Harry sat down next to Draco and pointed to the open chair on his other side for Theo to sit down and caressed Draco’s bulging belly, glancing down he noticed the red thin line starting to appear , the line that would eventually split open allowing his son to great the world. Six weeks he thought six weeks give or take a day or two he would hold his son for the first time.
Theo was confused, he had expected to be ostracized by the other Sidhe, but the opposite was actually happening. He was getting hugged and commented on and even little tidbits of special food placed near him. Finally ignoring his Slytherin side he leaned over towards Harry, “What in Merlin’s name is going on, I swear I am being flirted with! Why is everyone being so nice instead of hexing me ten ways from Sunday?”
Laughing at the perplexed look on Theo’s face Harry tried to explain in between laughter, ‘It’s very simple, the rumor mill worked overtime last night and now everyone knows that you are a willing Brooder, which means they are attempting to catch your attention hoping you will choose one of them to be one of the parents of the child you will carry. You will choose each of your child’s fathers, unless you agree to a mated pairs request to carry their child.”
Perplexed Theo shook his head trying to understand the concept of what he was being told, it almost sounded like he was being asked to decide who became a couple, “I thought you would be making hat decision for me?”
Shaking his had as he filled Draco’s plate for him Harry tried to explain, “I did not set any conditions on you except that you had to bear us, meaning the Sidhe, three children,” Harry told him as he fixed his own plate, “I found your truth and willingness to make amends worthy of the gifts you will receive. By being willing, I changed you slightly when for a lack of a better term grew new parts within you so you could carry children. One of the side effects since you were not turned into a Thrall first is that your magic will be boosted and the pool or core you pull from will increase in size. With the new wand you will get later on today you will be a very powerful wizard.”
Pushing the empty plate in front of the teen towards him and motioning for him to eat Harry tried to stop jumping around, “Ok point one, when someone is transformed into a Brooder it is traditional for them to control who the person mates with. That means they control who the fathers will be. In the rare case were someone is transformed willingly they get to choose who the fathers will be. Just remember that once you are pregnant your sex drive will increase and you will be having loads of sex with the two fathers, it helps to calm the baby and comfort you. “
Sipping his juice Harry noticed that so far Theo seemed to be following along and most people were listening in hoping for Theo to look at them as a viable choice, “You are in total control of who is the fathers, it also means that if you choose one father from a mated pair you do not have to choose the partner as the other father. There will be no hard feelings between any of the mated pairs, as they will more than likely have children together by using a Brooder down the line.”
“Tradition has that the decision you made to give yourself up freely, not knowing if it was to enslavement, though you expected it, or even death, to grant you a boon. The utterly random factor that will conceive the children you carry for us.” Harry told him shrugging as he spooned more eggs onto Draco’s plate, “if I had said you owe me three children instead of the Sidhe as a whole I would choose your partners, as it is you choose.”
“The only rule you have to follow is that both fathers must be Sidhe, afterwards if you wish to father a child for two wizards you can do so, but you may not mix wizard and Sidhe. Your first child should also be Sidhe fathers to help cement the rise in your new powers, I know Neville would have been looking for someone to carry a child for him as he has decided on having a daughter by Thomas Bradcliff, but I think Draco will carry that child for him,” Harry told him before concentrating for a moment and asking the Sithen to provide a book for him.
Picking the book up off the table where it seemed to melt out of the top Harry handed the thin volume over, “Read this after breakfast, it will give you some of the history of your new position and the power you will wield in the Wizarding world after the three children you will carry for us are born. You will be in great demand by families wanting to form an alliance but have no daughters, you will be able to name your price…any price, for your services.”
Draco listening in to the conversation looked down to see Neville talking to the twins and remembering back to the times he had sucked the Gryffindor he instantly became hard as he remembered that Neville was of above average size and he was quite above average in his girth also, he quietly moaned as he thought of…He shook his head trying tot think of something else or he would be bending over the table demanding loudly to be taken loudly, for some odd reason he was hornier than usual this morning, it might have something to due with the red line that appeared on his stomach overnight.
Thinking about how helpful Harry was being Theo asked, “Even if one of the fathers I want is you?”
Nodding his head Harry looked over towards the house and noticed Katre making his way along with the Hufflepuff he had taken with him yesterday, “yes Theo even if you want me to be one of the fathers, or even if you wan time to be there when the two you have chosen to be the fathers make love to you, creating the new life, if you want me to be there I will be.”
“Thank you, I think I will want that,” Theo said as he started to eat finally as he looked around the table looking at all those gathered and thinking of the possibilities.
Jumping up from his chair Deven brushed up against Theo in his haste to make room for Harry’s cousin, the touch was electrifying Theo though as he felt a tingle in the new tunnel just under his balls. Appraising the rising form he thought to himself who would best match for the Sidhe warrior, it would be perfect, he would be bale to share Harry’s bedroom until he was totally comfortable with the whole Brooder idea. Maybe he should walk around touching the others to see if they two gave him that tingly feeling, if not than that would be what he would use to decide on fathers then.
Katre sat down and pulled the defiant teen down and placed him near his leg, handing him several slices of toast and some bacon, “Eat…don’t move as there really is no where for you to go.”
Raising an eyebrow Harry looked across the table, “Problems cousin?” before looking under the table at the defiant death eater who was silently eating while fuming.
Katre growled then he sighed as he started to fix a plate, “Nothing that turning stick dick here into a Thrall won’t cure.”
Harry sprayed the table with his drink as he chocked trying to laugh, moping up the mess and coughing several times in-between laughing and Draco’s snorting Harry picked his head up off Draco’s shoulder incredulous, ‘Stick dick? Do I even want to…I take it back I do want to know.”
Shaking his head Katre pulled the teen in question up to his feet and standing up lifted him so his feet were on his chair facing Harry, smacking him harshly on the butt when he tried to hide himself he growled out, “stop that…hands behind your back right now.” Grabbing both wrists as when the teen did as he ordered he pulled him close and started to stroke the teen to total hardness. Slowly at first the Hufflepuff’s body responded and after several minutes a proud stiff member stood up at attention…problem was it might be four and a half inches American and about as thick as Harry’s thumb.
Draco couldn’t hold it in any longer, and seeing Theo start to take a drink asked, “Do you have to tie a board to that skinny ass so he doesn’t fall in.” Theo sprayed his water all over the place and blushed furiously before he broke down in laughter and turned to get a good look at the lads equipment.
After the laughter died down Katre picked up the Hufflepuff seventh year and placed him back on the ground and pushed him back to the ground as he sat down, “you were right to think that moving the death eaters off world would break the link embedded within the mark, as soon as we entered the Sithen the mark turned green and became dormant, we then took him outside and the mark became completely dead, no traces of energy could be found and it completely faded leaving unblemished skin, upon our return this morning the mark is back but green and dormant.”
Harry smiled, he was happy the death eaters could be of some use, “Good then they are yours, we will start tracking them down and capturing them, after Voldemort is gone for good we can share them if needed. Is there a cut off age that would make them undesirable for Brooder’s or do you want all of the ones that we capture?”
“Any of his inner circle is more than likely out, as they may have been tortured past the point they are no longer fertile. And frankly some of them are so old or ugly even by putting a bag over their head I wouldn’t want to touch them.” Katre sighed as he lunged forward grabbing the Hufflepuff by his hair as he tried once more to escape. “Enough of this,” Katre spat in anger as his eyes roamed around for one of his people. Spotting one of his over by the lake he yelled out for him, “TERRAN.”
Hearing his king bellow for him Terran ran to the table and quickly bowed, “I am here as my King commands.”
Picking up the Hufflepuff by the back of his neck Katre shook him slightly, “Take this insufferable excuse for a wizard and Enthrall him immediately, I tire of his constant escape attempts and disobedience.”
Grabbing the teen that was pushed into his arms Terran held on and nibbled his ear as he told him clearly, you best not struggle or it will go rough on you as his hand started to glow and he cleaned the teen out in preparation from being entered. His King had said immediately and he would do it right now in this spot, so he started to fondle the teen to bring him to hardness as his King and his cousin moved off.
Theo watched as Philip was made into a Thrall, he watched and realized how lucky he really was, finished with his meal he shrugged his shoulder before picking up his book and making his way down the beach looking for a spot to sit and read. Finding a sand dune that looked just about right he sat down and leaned back as started to read. He supposed he should have been shocked to find out that he was called Myrrdyn, which in the Ancient Tongue meant the Brooder who chooses, he wondered if Merlin knew this and that is why he used a name so close to the Sidhe one, an I instead of a Y, in the hopes of the prestige and power that others would give him, if so it was very Slytherin of him.
Between greeting a few of the other Sidhe and the book he was right in his assumption that he would get a physical feeling to know which two Sidhe to choose to be fathers, he would find the best match after choosing the first father. Finishing the thin volume Theo looked off over the lake thinking about what he had read, one thing for sure he would offer being the Brooder for Ron if he wished to bring new blood into his family, it was the least he could do after injuring him that way.
Seeing a shadow cross his Theo looked up to see Draco holding his belly flop down gingerly near him, “Hi Draco got tired of all the talk as they divided up the world,” Theo laughed at his joke.
Smiling Draco leaned back letting the sun warm him, “No it was actually pretty captivating what was being discussed, I just had to leave because there was a call on the mirror from one of the guards left at Hogwarts, seems my father wanted to plead his case, and I wanted no part in talking to him.”
Theo nodded, “Understandable, I don’t think I would want to talk to my father either. Though I am sure he would try to talk me into Brooding some monstrosity with the Voldemort trying to gain favor with it.” Sighing sometimes I wish he would have died back during the first war, at least my little brother and Terry and I would have still had a mother. I honestly hope he is killed and not Enthralled so I don’t have to deal with him.”
“That’s pretty likely, as he might not be fertile anymore as he is part of the inner circle isn’t he?” Iestyn said as he crested the dune and started down the slope the two were leaning against, “how are you holding up Draco?” looking over to the blond Iestyn caught sight of the red mark running down the center of his belly, “Congratulations Draco, it won’t be long now, maybe another six weeks before Harry’s son is born.”
“How the Bloody Hell do you know that,” Draco asked as he turned so he was on his side facing the Sidhe warrior.
Leaning across Theo he traced the red line down the center of Draco’s belly, ‘This line appears around six weeks before birth, the closer you are to the due date the more of a crevasse will form until the skin eventually splits allowing the baby to come forth.” Brushing his arm across Theo as he returned to his own position he was not ready for the other to hiss out in pleasure, or for the fact that his cock became erect between one breath and another and started to shoot off volley after volley of his seed.
Coming down off the orgasmic high Theo was panting as he muttered, “a little pleasure the book said, bloody hell…at least I now know who the second father is.”
Iestyn was shocked, he was the second father, then who was the first and who the hell forgot to tell him that there was a Myrrdyn now. So many thoughts started to run through his head as he glanced at the cum covered teen next to him, he was absolutely covered from head to his pubes, he sure produced an impressive amount of seed. Helping Theo get to his feet, “I think we need to go talk to his majesty, he can help you with the next step.”
Theo reached down for Draco to grab hold so he could get to his knees as he was having a little trouble standing without help, being so pregnant caused him to be unwieldy. Helping steady Draco he did not mind when Iestyn scooped up a trail of his spent seed and tasted it, all he did was smile at him as he looked down and was happy to see he looked about average size.
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Harry and Katre slowly made their way to the mirror leading to Hogwarts and stared at eh kneeling aristocrat on the other side, Jesse had his hand on the senior Malfoy and Harry did notice as he came to a stop that Lucius was very naked.
“Tell me Lucius Malfoy why do you wish to speak with me?” Harry asked as he watched the man carefully for any signs of deception.
Glancing up at the glowing figure on the other side of the mirror Lucius knew that he was correct, the downfall of the dark lord all those years ago was not a fluke, and if he wished to survive he had to convince the one he had tried so hard to bring down he was willing to change, “I wish to offer my services in the hopes of correcting my mistake all those years ago.”
Harry stared at the man, he did not believe a word the other spoke, he was doing this for one thing only to save his own skin. That and the possibility of getting his hands on the Malfoy fortune once more, it must be driving him spare knowing that he could not touch a single Knut without Draco giving it to him, and Draco would not do anything without asking first as he now loathed his father’s hypocrisy. “Stand Lucius let us see all of you,” Harry ordered the kneeling man.
As Lucius stood and Harry’s eyes traveled down the man’s body, like he was examining a horse to be used at stud, “There is several things you will have to accomplish if you are to be taken into our service Lucius.” Pointing at the man’s wilted penis he motioned for Jesse to help him out, “You will give us a list of every known death eater, their names and ages and location,” Seeing Lucius stiffen at the touch Harry smiled, “You will also provide a list of every known sympathizer that is not marked with a similar requirement of name and so forth.”
Noticing that Lucius was not responding to Jesse’s touch Harry had to wonder of what use he could be to them, ‘The final thing you must do is to prove you are fertile. I believe your wife needs another child to fuss over, see to it that she carriers your child before I seek out and destroy that monstrosity and you shall have shelter with the Sidhe.”
Draco along with Theo and Iestyn walked up as Harry was finishing his conversation and Lucius’s eyes widened in surprise as he caught the first glimpse of his son. Following the man shocked gaze Harry turned and noticed Draco standing there, smiling when he caught sight of the blond it did not go unnoticed that Theo was practically covered in spent seed, and knowing the teen from this morning it was more than likely his own, that boy sure produced a surprising amount, it was a wonder he did not dehydrate. Wanting to feed the man’s ego and spread disinformation at the same time, “Jesse tell him the tale of Myrrdyn.”
Bowing his head Jesse smirked, “Yes my King,” before touching the mirror and releasing the energy connection, returning it to its normal surface, ‘You may dress now…and as my King has commanded you need to learn about Myrrdyn.
Now that the mirror was off Harry looked up at Katre, “he is infertile, so do you have a use for him or shall I let him perish with the rest we have no use for?” before turning towards Draco, “I am saddened you had to see this or even here what you are, he is still your father after all, even if he was not the best he could have been.”
Holding off on his answer Katre looked over to the Myrrdyn smiling, “I see you have found the first fathers of your child. May we know who they will be?”
Theo Nodded his head, “I think the book needs updating you gave me, it certainly was a little more than a tingle when I found the second father,” he gestured to his drying chest, ‘Iestyn is one and the other is Deven.”
“Congratulations Iestyn, this is something you have secretly wished for I think, and you will be a spectacular father to your son,” Katre exclaimed as he pulled the red streaked Sidhe into a hug, knowing how important it was for Iestyn to be a good father seeing how horrible is early life was.
Pulling Theo into a hug Harry licked the drying droplets off his cheek and kissed him, “When do you wish to do this? And more importantly where do you wish this to happen?”
Theo’s eyes glazed over briefly as the he answered, “The Nei’Loch watches as the King guides and the roses rustle as the first child shall be conceived.” Stumbling slightly as his eyes returned to normal. Eyes flashing panic he whispered, “Merlin protect me, the gift f sight does not run in my family.”
Smiling amidst the gently falling rose petals that just appeared above them Harry gathered Theo up before he could panic any further, trying to calm him down, “Theo…it is not the gift of sight as you think of it, it is a wondrous gift that the Powers have awakened in you. Your gift is totally focused on your station as Myrrdyn, you will always know the best way to conceive a child for you to carry, and you will know at the moment of conception things about the unborn child that will amaze even us,” Harry told him softly kissing his lips to distract him, “do not panic over so little of the sight graced upon you.”
Seeing Theo was calm, if not aroused and handling it better Harry stepped back before reaching out and taking on of Iestyn’s free hands and pulling him towards the Myrrdyn, “Draco go inside and find Deven and bring him to us.” Pulling Theo’s face towards his Harry passionately kissed him, releasing him after a few moment he did the same for Iestyn before guiding both their heads together as his hand get Iestyn’s hardness from touching Theo, keeping him from thrusting deep inside the Myrrdyn as his instinct was trying to force him to do as he lost himself to the passion the two were creating.
As the three were engulfed in a slowly brightening circle of power Deven came running and stopped briefly outside the glowing firestorm of power before Harry reaching out without looking touched him, drawing him into the glowing orb of power, once inside the power intensified like a raging sun and as the spots faded before everyone’s eyes the four were gone, leaving behind a stunned and happy group. The Sidhe had children by the power of their King, for the King to have a son nearing birth and for another pair of Sidhe to be chosen so soon after a Myrrdyn was created gave those gathered an infusion of joy and the knowledge they had a bright future.
Appearing many miles away, in a section of the Sithen not ventured to yet Harry and company appeared in a small clearing of wild roses as the vines climbed one another showering the ground with soft pale petals. Both hands busy trying to keep both Sidhe from entering Theo, as they were long lost to passion as the three fought over who could touch the most of each other Harry knew he had to wait until the Nei’Loch showed before allowing things to go any further.
Turning his head to the right, towards the rustling sound coming from the vines Harry smiled as the vines parted allowing the Nei’Loch to pad its way into the clearing and sit down to watch. Time now right Harry slowly bent the resisting hard cock that Iestyn was trying to force into Theo’s flesh and finally getting it to the right angle slowly guided it into the newly created tunnel and let go, allowing the passion to take over as the glow around them intensified.
Both hands free now to control Deven’s erection Harry entered his true mate to distract him all the while guarding Deven’s erection, not allowing to get any of the contact it so desired as a way to keep his seed from erupting too early.
Hearing Iestyn’s breathing picking up Harry reached under Theo and placing his fingers along the spot just under where the tunnel met Theo’s butt crack and the erection was moving in and out of the tight tunnel felt the penis start to swell before the pulsing of the seed being pumped deep inside the end of the tight tunnel. Slipping out of Deven Harry moved to the side and knelt down so as soon Iestyn stopped to pause so he could ride his orgasm he could move Theo so he faced Deven.
Feeling the pulsing had stopped Harry wedged himself between Theo and Iestyn gently as he guided the still hard erection out of Theo’s body and turned the lad to face Deven. Reaching around he guided Deven’s hardness into the tunnel slowly and moved out of the way as Iestyn moved closer as he started to come down from his high. Giving a slight tug to Deven’s balls to start the other moving Harry moved out of the way and guided Iestyn’s hardness towards Theo’s tight rosebud and using a finger to loosen it a little first and lubricate the hole slid Iestyn home.
As both Sidhe made love with Theo in the middle Harry moved behind Iestyn and slowly entered the other, duty done for the moment, he was intent of fulfilling his own rising passion. Theo beside himself with the pleasure he was feeling pulled Deven closer as if to try to force him deeper inside him all the while his prostate going wild as it was rubbed from two sides sending him into the wildest orgasm of his life clenching down with both muscles front and back sending his two partners into their own orgasm.
Harry only a few seconds behind the others with his own climax slipped out of Iestyn after spilling his seed deep inside the other to gently disengage both Sidhe from Theo while hand glowing with power he placed it on the teens lower belly giving the power needed to mix the seed and create new life. Guiding the week kneed teen to lay along the laying Nei’Loch Harry laid next to him as they watched Deven and Iestyn finish making love, slaking the power induced lust one final time.
Picking up Theo’s ball sack so he had unobstructed view of the slit underneath Harry smiled in satisfaction as he watched it close and seal, a sure sign that a child had been conceived. Guiding the spent Sidhe so they rest on either side of Theo Harry made to leave so they could rest alongside with the Hell hound of the rivers and streams when Theo’s voice stopped him.
“The child is made, son of Deven…son of Iestyn and he will be known as Cyric the keeper of the Nei’Loch. He shall have hair the color of the whitecaps breaking in the rapids of the stream and eyes yellow of the morning buttercup surrounded by the blue of the night ringed by the fire.” Theo’s voice drifted off as he fell into deep slumber while the two fathers gazed at each other in surprise.
Joyous at both the news of the child with his strong name and the fact that the first of many children had been conceived Harry grabbed for the energy tendril leading back to the house and stepped onto it, riding the power back home.
Tuesday, November 20, 2007
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3 comments:
omg, you were not joking baout the cold bath, thank god I picked it up at home...
OMG I work in a high school, thoughts of trying to read this in lunch break then work my afternoon full of children OMG is all I have to say, so Theo is very high powered, will his kids be as quick as dracos? he has 3 months done and 6 weeks to go at most, if not less?
he so owes ron a daughter... not only did he hurt ron but gained out of it!!! hee hee an over weight pregnant draco is one of fanfics funniest images, please keep it up (in both senses) and show us ginger bitch and the bushhy bitch soon please.
also lucius needs slapping down, but cissy may be savable?
oh please some dursley slapping would be welcome... and I shall giggle my way round school thinking of you and your jacket tied round your waist.
lol ruey
Ok, now that i've read this chapter..Ron, i can tell that Draco'z character isn't even better or more powerful then any of the other male characters, that includes Nott..I see why you're soo reluctant and uncomfortable to answer that one ? I had for you..I definitely got my answer from this chapter..
I feel soo sorry for Draco'z character..There's no love at all in the so called relationship he has with Harry..He's just there for breeding and he's even worst off then Nott, and i find the situation just utterly ridiculous ..He's going to *BREED* for neville now..??? Arggg....Disgusting and not good enough for Draco'z character..I don't care how likable his character is..He's an alright kinda boy, but not GOOD enough for Draco..That's just how i feel....
There's basically no LOVE at all and there's definitely not going to be a baby from H/D..I know that now..
I can't continue to read this story...The story itself is great but when it comes to the relationship aspect of this story..Its just plain wrong and that's just me being nice......Harry should have someone he loves, and i mean, TRULY love(one person) be it his cousin or Draco or whomever, just pick one and stay with them and if it's the kind of story where he has lots of bed partners, fine, but still LOVES only one..I honestly don't see that happening here at all..He's just using them(Draco) and there isn't even LOVE there..It's just horrible to read...It's not the dark theme, killings, torture or whatever that bothers me, those i don't care and can take but the other aspects of this story..I can't..Your story lacks in substance when it comes to that dept otherwise a truly good read..
Bye,
K,
Draco carrying a child for Neville and Thomas, could be more than likely not happening as it is not even listed in my notes as more than a possibility. But Unseelie are cruel in their choice of words, but they will not lie.
Draco's relationship is only seventh months old so far in this story line and it started out as a sexual slave, let's be realistic I am not about to wave the magic wand and boom they are in love. Harry will come to care deeply for Draco and he does have a true mate in Deven.
To the Sidhe good sex is just that good sex, He will mostly from now on settle down to Deven only along with Draco and he will have others join in from time to time, but it will be along with Deven and Draco in bed with them
But for the story line of the last chapter and the concept of the rest of his race being only as prolific as their king, he was needed for the scene of the first non royal conception. And if you notice the only not there was Draco.
Let's not forget the past 6 or 7 chapters three days have passed, not a whole lot of time to change your mind on a relationship storyline wise especially when that relationship started out as a slave to carry your child.
Just like in an arranged marriage of old, there is no love only breeding, love can be grown from the seeds of the marriage but not forced. I am not about to have Harry fall deeply in love with any of the characters for some time, it will be a gradual building of things. I could always use the old ploy of jumping ahead in the story and boom they are now a threesome, but that does not work for this story.
I have to show several things in Draco's character and learning to overcome being a slave is one of them, it is not something that happens overnight in reality. The Sidhe magic changed his very being, his thought process included, now he has to grow from that point.
According to my notes Draco has 3 children during the story arc
1 by Katre and Harry
2 by Deven and Harry and Deven in my notes had a third child by another.
So far I am on track with two of those
And as far as Draco according to my notes he is on track to he is becoming a friend with Harry, as Harry starts to feel more for him than just a vessel for his child.
BUT it will take time
So sorry if you are not patient or liking the story any longer, but I refuse to change my stories any more for others so they like them better.
The first draft of this story outline a year ago had Draco a drooling mindless slave only good to pop out babies. As the story grew so did Draco into something else from what I had planned on. I also had planned on Harry being with only one person, but as the world and society was built around the Sidhe so changed Harry's character to fit the world I built around them.
This is a National Novelist Writing Month copy, the final version most likely will be close but oh so different when it is done, more than likely it will be almost half again as long.
I create an outline with concepts
I write a chapter
A few weeks later I go back and fix and flesh out the chapter
I send it to the editor and then fix anything else
I post it to my group
I fix anything and make small changes over the next week
I finally call it done and post it to the web
What you are reading now is at step 2 from above
This jus this me wrong at the right moment so all the extra info you get
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